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Henry Gomez of Cleveland.com posted two articles related to the convention this week: one focused on Donald Trump's "hostile" hijack of the Republican party and a second on a proposed plan to have John Kasich as the alternative to Trump at the convention.
The article focused on Trump hijacking the party went into great detail about some of the most crass statements that Trump has made in regards to any kind of human consideration, how this campaign makes many nostalgic for Romney's campaign as well as the hope that Rubio's campaign brought, and the hesitance for any true Republicans to back up Trump in any way in order to preserve the party's fundamental ideals.
The second article discussed New Hampshire Sen. Gordon Humphrey's proposed plan to have John Kasich step up as the alternative to Trump at the convention. Humphrey originally had considered Romney as well but ultimately ruled him out, according to an email Humphrey sent to Kasich allies. Chris Schrimpf, a spokesman for Kasich's political team, has responded to the story asserting that Kasich's only plans for the convention are to preserve the safety of the city and to not disrupt.
References
Gomez, Henry. (2016) Donald Trump leads the Republican Party down a troubling, fateful path to Cleveland: analysis. Cleveland.com. Retrieved from http://www.cleveland.com/open/index.ssf/2016/07/donald_trump_leads_the_republi_1.html.
Gomez, Henry. (2016) A key ally is urging John Kasich to step up as the GOP convention alternative to Donald Trump. Cleveland.com. Retrieved from http://www.cleveland.com/open/index.ssf/2016/07/a_key_ally_is_urging_john_kasi.html.
You need to fix the final paragraph so the part that got moved to the end, starting with "ost horrible statements," goes back to the middle, where the "m" that begins that paragraph has run into the red type about Kasich.
ReplyDeleteIf you broke up your writing into shorter paragraphs, this would not be as likely to happen. that's one reason journalists do this.
I'm not sure what happened there but that makes sense. Thank you for pointing this mistake out!
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